Blog Post 8: The Initial Proposal

My initial proposal was crucial so I could get some critical feedback from my classmates. I did this by writing up notes into a notebook and pitching my idea during a lesson.

My first couple ideas

                                       Idea #1

I took my ideas down in note form so I could pitch my basic idea as soon as possible. I then expanded on this after I got my feedback from my peers.

My adverts were based on the idea that the characters had everything ready for an eventful night, they had this and that ready, but they had forgotten the food.

These next 2 pictures show a rough storyboard of what I had in mind as I could visualize my advert quite well.

Idea #2

My second advert is about some people getting ready for a game night but had ultimately forgotten the food.

My Initial storyboards:

The critical feedback I received helped me think about the smaller details about my advert that I had not considered such as where I should film the adverts and how I could exaggerate most of the actors' movements in order to help convey the intended message with ease.